Black Haiku : Whisky in my Cup

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    Whisky in my cup
    Tweet's song plays in the background
    I stand all alone
    With a glass of dark whisky,
    And worries in tow
    A bit of sorrow and pain
    Accompany rain
    And it fall's while my sorrow
    Drowns in my dark cup,
    Full of pure whisky.
     
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    every sip under
    take da longlyness away
    the tunes playin soft
     
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    Drunk and lost in winds
    I continue my sipping
    feeling it spread out.
    Man, this feeling is real good.
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    enterlure within
    the flava so tasty and
    sooth the day out too
     
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    Whisky in my cup
    Swallowing an elixir
    To chase away pain
     
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    Tears in my hand, fall
    I drown myself in liquor
    I'm caught in a daze.
     
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    Day in and day out
    I go on this way, drowning
    Who will rescue me?
     
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    The brown liquid mirrors
    All of the inner struggles,
    I face day to day
    Why do I continue drinking this?
     
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    Whiskey deceives you.
    No matter how much you drink...
    The pain is still there. :(
     
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    The Pain travels through,
    I still drown my sorrows in
    A glass of whiskey
     
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