Black Poetry : Whirl Winn

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Antar, Jun 28, 2004.

  1. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    jus wanna pass this expression 2 u
    been learnin a lessin or 2
    blew my top hot headed
    almost dreaded
    in shoes
    diary of my stars by my navel
    i pray with breath
    as my mysterious
    astrological forces clash
    obscene sentencing
    my life sucked into a sentence
    ---****, what bent meant
    and now what it is
    i'm a big *** kidd
    can't even go to showbizzz
    my petty ego hides behind my
    id
    superid
    takin 9 shots
    at yo kids
    so i'm creoled not fried
    lurkin witch devil eyes
    sympathize
    my patterns towards my evenings
    empathize



    Supp' my folks - Supp' my peoples
    my worlds is still revolvin
    shiiists deep dough

    one love one thug
    -harmony

    by Paradise

    one,
    /antar
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    interesting stanzas son...
    keep scribing
    and one day...it will all make sense....word
    one love
    khasm
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop
    like how you posed it
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    once again u bless us with a tyte drop
     
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