Black Poetry : *** Whipping

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  1. Cindy

    Cindy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My brother
    Laid me down on the bathroom floor
    The floor was tiled
    And cold

    This isn’t any memory
    Contrived by some helpful therapist
    Inserted into my head
    I remember it plain as day

    I was 5 years old to his 15
    My dress pulled up over my head
    So he didn’t see my face as he pumped between my legs
    Taking my mental virginity

    When my sister was away from our bed
    At slumber parties I didn’t sleep alone
    My brother inserted himself between the sheets
    And between my legs

    When I came home from school
    I was allowed to play down the street at Debbie’s house
    But when I came home and didn’t want to ‘play’ with brother
    He said ‘I’m gonna tell Mom you went to Debbie’s’

    And I never wanted that *** whipping
    So I never told
    Never told about going up to play in the tree house
    Where I was forbidden to go

    Never told that it went on for 6 years
    For fear of the *** whipping I would get
    For being bad and doing things Mommy forbid me to do
    Or for places I was forbidden to go

    Never knew
    What he did was worse than I could ever dream
    So I went bad in school never caring about good grades
    And was a belligerent child

    I became the ‘black sheep’ of the perfect children
    That made good grades
    Was labeled for my belligerence
    As a druggy when I was clean

    But I didn’t tell
    I didn’t want that *** whipping
    Mommy would have given me
    For telling lies about her son
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Words can become so HEAVY. Heavier than Mount Rushmore, the pyramids, the planets. This was worth it's weight in GOLD. Scribe on Sister, scribe on.

    your brother blak
     
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    well done cindy flow head ya know !
     
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    RE: hi

    good-afternoon Cindy,


    had to respond via this piece before logging off...


    ==
    ==
    I was 5 years old to his 15
    My dress pulled up over my head
    So he didn’t see my face as he pumped between my legs
    Taking my mental virginity

    When my sister was away from our bed
    At slumber parties I didn’t sleep alone
    My brother inserted himself between the sheets
    And between my legs
    ==
    ==


    you going to make a brother cry, as i for one can't imagine being molested by a family member, etc... one should never have to experience something like this, as such an action can truly ruin one MENTALLY... as for thy brother he shall have to answer to the man above one day, as people are just crazy, and living ungodly... in all hopefully you are at peace now, and able to live life to the fullest...

    have a nice weekend...

    sincerely,
    c.t.adams-///
     
  5. Cindy

    Cindy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    : )

    There is never a time when I am not delighted to read your posts to my pieces.
    Thank you. Thank you for feeling my words and taking the journey with me.
    All my :heart:
    Cindy
     
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