Black Poetry : Whipped ~

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She's a poem for the ages
    even sages take notice of her
    she put the "O" in outrageous
    like the love we make of course

    She's so fine,
    like Richard said
    I'd suck her daddy's wick ~
    never mind you get the picture

    Next to nature...
    there is nothing more beautiful
    than a beautiful black exotic queen
    Know what I mean obscene jelly bean

    I pine for her as a wife
    you know what that feels like
    ask a brother stunned by that
    which personifies his very being

    As if she emanates from
    what it means to be a dream
    her loveliness expressed in verse
    expressed by pangs of heartfelt bliss

    Her likeness is forever etched
    in minds of men madly in love
    who write poems of hope endlessly
    and wish to become prey to her femininity


    Darryl Abdu Omari :snapoutofit:
    a.k.a. 1poetsought ~ whipped
     
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    I love you, darling
    and everything about you.
    I look forward to the day
    we merge our lives
    as husband and wife.
    I'm coming home
    to you, soon.
    Please believe,
    I'm whipped, too.

    (smile)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    just can't break it down any better then this ......
     
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    Axelrod and Artis
    knee deep in the forest
    looked on as a man
    peed on the trees ~
     
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    I just love a good poem talking about the sisters that we love...write on scribe, griot, poet
     
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