Black Poetry : Whipped Cream

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Dec 26, 2008.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MEN
    Get on top
    Then don't you stop
    When she gets HOT
    That's when the shoe must drop ~

    LAME
    Kitty whipped
    Trained by a slip
    Creamed over IT
    Leaving my manhood soft

    MEN
    Stay on top
    When drawers do drop
    Send forget me K-N-O-T-S

    Woman this mess done stopped!



    Darryl Abdu Omari :flowers:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2008
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U said it best on top all da rest is the only way to play da cream whip splat
    so us men don't be got , staying on top ! this joint is hot .
     
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    Supreme Cream, 1poetsought - well done!! :)
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    this was hot

    and so true too

    that's real

    lol
     
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    free2b_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    why stopp??
    Take it to the head
    HOT screams
    Sweet dreams
    handcuffs N whipped cream
    Sounds good 2 me
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    STOP in the name of LOVE

    PEACE
     
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    spread it in da name of love .....creamy twist
     
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    take your time and do it right
    impetuous lust is not a substitute for love
    good stuff brother 1poet
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Experience teaches you nothing, if not patience...

    Have I waited long enough to say "I love You".

    THANKS
     
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