Black Poetry : While My Lady Sleeps (Coltrane's Love)

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  1. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we made love
    so sweetly
    so frequently we shared
    our very essence with one another.

    again.
    again.
    and again.
    she loved me
    and I loved her
    into we ecstasy.

    so gently as she sleeps
    she plays a melody
    of a memory
    of her loving
    as my lady sleeps.
    as she sleeps.

    so i gingerly
    and tenderly
    tip toe through my memory
    so as not to disturb
    a single sigh
    a single cry
    so as not to wrinkle
    the freshness
    of her loving me.

    so gently as she sleeps
    she plays a melody
    of a memory
    of her loving
    as my lady sleeps.
    as she sleeps.
    and begin to weep....

    she has so impacted me
    my memory
    of her
    Silohetted in beauty
    moon shining over her left shoulder
    balcony of our honeymoon suite
    as the angels sing
    a symphony
    of marital harmony
    on the first night we made love.

    so gently as she sleeps
    she plays a melody
    of a memory
    of her loving
    as my lady sleeps.
    as she sleeps.
    and as i weep....
    i thank my God for this
    gift given unto me.

    love.
     
  2. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    kl.


    ...this part made me sigh! & the peace in
    it's entirety has me hooked on your jazzy
    flow... keep brangin' it, my dear!! :)

    itsallLove.

    elayne.
     
  3. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i am in a coltrane mood - dude is speakin' to my soul. keep flowing with me while i ride this wave of inspiration.
     
  4. sweet_journey

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    This piece is so hypnotizingly peaceful and beautiful and just...well and just soothing!! Outstanding piece, beautiful piece, I feel blessed to have visited your page. Keep flowin and keep lovin...
    Sweet-Journey
     
  5. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the read Sweet! Much Love to you!
     
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