Black Poetry : WHILE HE'S LOCKED UP

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  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    Don't invoke the side I've regressed
    Where the pawns of my conception bore daughter oppressed

    Let me stand, deep in your soul
    Open your heart and let my essence unfold

    Don't force me into the slavery of manning a home
    For it's your right of passage and yours alone

    And I'll let nothing capture my king
    For a queen with no king is not anything

    And, it's through your transgressions I learn to stand alone
    Axiously waiting for you to come home.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hard for him knowing that his mistake is making her wait, difficult for her knowing that her hands are tied. Poetess, I really like your style.
     
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    the depth and cry of a queen he's coming home sooner then u think
    great piece
     
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    Off the C-H-A-I-N


    You're one down sister, baby :hearts4:
     
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    Mayne!
    Another scribe from tha (((deep sistah chronicles)))
    :hammer2:
    Love ya poet
    Desert Storm
     
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    Hi Miss Lady
    Yes indeed sister
    You speak it, release the message
    I agree..this drop is very deep.

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    Seems like most of our life is spent "waiting" on something but your words speak volumes to your loyalty and love! Great piece as usual my sister!
     
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