Black Poetry : Where's the time

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  1. Flyy baby luv

    Flyy baby luv Member MEMBER

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    What should i say
    notwanting to cause an argument
    But I did it anyway

    You're never here you're always gone working late
    Somethings wrong

    You dont call as much as you used to
    sometimes I think you are being untrue

    No you'd never do that to us
    no matter how much you lust

    So what is it, is it me
    did I do something to reroute you curiosity

    I miss You
    I long for you
    I NEED you- wait I don't need you

    You say you're mine
    well where's the time

    The time we were supposed to use to create memories
    and a future of we
    us together forever- possibly

    So where's the time
    or is there
    time for me
     
  2. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was tyte....I like the concept and everything......deep read
     
  3. Flyy baby luv

    Flyy baby luv Member MEMBER

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    thanks

    thanks its nice to know some one my age can really appreciate a peers mind set
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!

    wow very tyte drop deep and well felt flow on
    as i welcome u to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome from above as i bless u some love
    do join us in chat too 24/7 wow at
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    keep flowing and return some love as love is given
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Where's the time? I think we've all asked that a time or two. Keep flowin, we'll keep reading.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome to deste...
    tight drop
    hope to read more
    Peace
    Angel
     
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