Black Poetry : Where's My Check?

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  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Where's my check?"
    It's in what's called a checkbook
    You write one to pay your own bills

    "Where's my check?"
    You'll get one after eating in a restaurant

    "Where's my check?"
    You'll be handed one
    when you check your coat and hat
    at the theater

    "Where's my check?"
    Your check is in the envelope
    you get after working all week

    BE
    (c) 2002
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE

    giving you love on this piece, not just because you're my favorite, but because I agree. I am smiling at the clever way you came witit.

    Thank you, Poet. Continue sharing the many thangs on your mind!

    alyce
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and i still ain't got mines !!!! yet
    BE......ya telling da story of what all us wish to know
    like how u took dis on...
     
  4. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what I get in an envelope after working all week is Whaat?
    naw dog I beg to differ wit U on dis here one
    what I get at the end of the week in my envelope is
    a statement telling me how much everybody else got
    and what is left for me is just enough to by me a beer
    so I guess I get beer in my envelope (LOL)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lol.......still lookin fo da check !!!
    this one was a goody
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was cute short and to the point i likes
     
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