Black Poetry : Where You And I Belong

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  1. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Within you is where my
    Love roams free
    You are a gift of love
    Sent down to me
    Somethin' so special,
    You see....
    I bask in your rays of
    Light as I see them
    Shinin' through you
    Rainin' joys of happiness
    Flowin' through me
    Caressin' every minute
    I share with you
    Treasurin' those sweet
    Hours, too
    You are my life, within
    You is where my hopes
    And dreams come true
    Strong love for you,
    Baby....
    You are my passion
    Fullfillin' all my desires
    Dancin' on love rhapsody
    Tunes as we slip off into
    A melody
    I am your forever, you
    Are mine, too...
    You must know, that my
    Love resides in you
    You are my destination,
    Within you I have found
    The utmost strength of
    Oneness
    And I have become your
    Salvation in a stormy
    Struggle of life's many
    Complexities
    Your sun on a cloudy
    Day
    Your light in times of
    Darkness
    Your personal savior
    The reason for your
    Existence!
    And, oh, how my heart
    Has been redeemed!
    Hmm, and look at us
    Now, caught up on
    A love craze
    Craddlin' words of
    Love felt so strong,
    Is a place where
    You and I belong
    Yes, it feels like home!

    ~~~icantxpressenuffluvforu~~~

    kas lis, (c)2000...all rights reserved.
     
  2. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah it fells like home when you and that special some one belong. Can kick ya shoes off and relax and njoy one another's kwu.



    One
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOVING THIS IT REALLY FLOWED DIDN'TRHYME MUCHBUT IT FLOWED LIKE POETRY LOVING THIS NICE HOWYOU BROKE IT DOWN KEEP REPPING
     
  4. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm feeling this

    strong love, lady! Sing your love songs POETESS!

    YESSSS!


    thank you so much!

    a
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lister....


    Wow!... this is a powerful piece of work!!... i felt
    the love you expressed soooo eloquently! & i
    hope he appreciates it fully! :wink: i always say
    it... & i'll do so again... NObody does love like Lister!

    AlwaysLove.
    SunShyne~
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    You know lister i really needed to read something like this
    so soft so meaningful so real so loving

    thank you for sharing this

    you have come thru again
    you you are so deep

    but afterall you are a LEO
    right?


    >DSSNY<
     
  7. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the total contentment of true love....what a feeling...losing yourself in someone and finding exactly what you are looking for...nice piece...

    K
     
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    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What We All Need

    Loving love--you have made it easy for love--keep bringing it to the page--Amun-Ra
     
  9. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    zorb, yeah, gurl...home. thanx, for reading me.

    madd...well, i try not to rhyme, ma friend. but, that's just me. i thank you for reading me, as well.

    alyce, smiles to you, dear friend. thank you for reading me, i'm glad that you enjoyed it.
     
  10. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweet sunshyne...you, ma sista', are much too kind. thanx for ya constant support, dear friend.

    ma leo so'ja man, i'm glad that i could take you there. and the answer to ya question is yes. smiles to you.
     
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