Black Poetry : Where would I go

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I could run away
    Where would I go
    Will all my problems go away
    Wrap up in a world I hate so much….
    Peace lays but the pain grows
    Trap like a mouse in a cage
    When will it all end
    Dream to fly the wind
    With out pain with
    out the hurt
    and no regret just
    let me be me
    drama of my life
    Just want to be free
    If I could run away
    where would I go
    Lost of sense
    Wit no support
    The feelings are bare
    I make them so clear
    But they are not heard
    Please walk out
    Don’t come back
    Tryin to clean up me
    To be stronger…
    Tired of pretending
    This life aint for me
    What I want your not part of
    just go I want to
    be with another go to church on
    a Sunday morning and
    get my blessing
    show love as I can see
    my heart is bigger then
    you think..just don’t want you
    in my world in my life
    Just leave me alone
    As the hate grows
    Just want to run away to be free
    But I cant trap like a mouse in a cage
    I know it’s a love waiting for me
    Just seems so far away out of reach….
    But how will I know its true….
    Been hurt so much…
    I scream in my sleep
    For the pain I cant take no more
    Pity rival because I have
    a voice of my own
    And I learned to speak up…..
    If I run away
    where would I go
    Just
    Trap
    Cant breath
    As the hate grows….
    And the pain cuts….
    Washed away my fears
    But the pain brings me tears
    Because I did this to myself
    No one to blame….
    a promise of a promise
    I have tried to keep over the years….
    But the one I made it to is now gone
    12 years now…left me stuck
    no where to turn…..
    all its starting to kill
    me and stop me from growing
    into the woman I am
    getting to know today….
    If I run away where would I go….
    As of right now
    I wish to hide within myself
    And cut off the world……
    but I know that’s not the answer
    as I face it head on tryin
    to be on my own
    If I run away where would I go….
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was deep
    where can one go
    place ya self in the hope and faith
    wow!!
    i was took inside this piece deeply
    very well pose'd sistah
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    much love to you sis
    feeling your drop
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You're not the only one who has asked this question. But God has the answer even if it's not clear. Very emotively posed.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you rich...that faith keeps you
    when all else fails indeed, blue...glad yoou likes
    and watz..faith is stronger then anything
    Peace Angel
     
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    :deal:

    U go where the heart takes u and where the body finds rest and where the soul can thrive....

    I loved this drop angel and yes we all do have the same question even the HEAT BRINGER! :x:
     
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    I hear ya and feel ya most assuredly, sis. Have faith and continue on, cause this too shall pass. Much love, girl. :grouphug:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    where would i go
    inside myself and hold on...
    faith place in time...
    i will be free until then
    pray
    prayer
    pray
    thanks my fam
    for showing love
    peace
    angel
     
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    Man.. I know this feeling- I think we all do. For what its worth I think knowing where to go is revealed within the journey- the trick is to stay open. You have to refuse the urge to cut yourself off- for to lock yourself in, is to lock out all the resources that can move you to another place. I always find that in these times it works wonders to do something for someone worst off than yourself- I know it sounds lame, but there's nothing like a little perspective to tame that prowling beast... trust me, it is a beast- and you're the prey. But the power is within you to become the hunter- not the hunted.

    JAH Lives!
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    first i like to thank you for showin love and support
    second..i feel what you stay fo sho power is within
    where the faith be...thank you again for your reply....
    Peace Angel
     
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