Black Poetry : where were u

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by diva08, May 29, 2001.

  1. diva08

    diva08 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    where were you at my transformation
    absent as if you received no invitation
    hostile as if removed from all pleasant sensations
    while i was in an intense stage of maturation

    i needed you there so i could scream without opening my mouth
    so i could say what needed to be said without even going out
    of my comfort zone
    i was so alone
    and i needed you like the air i breathe
    and you act like you never knew me

    like i never did a thing for you
    like i never ever told you the truth
    like i never looked out for you
    pardon me if i asked for some support from you

    but your absence has given me immunity
    you no longer have a thing that i need
    and before i need you again you'll need me around
    but i won't be anywhere i can be found...

    diva08 (c) 2001
     
  2. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh oh oh GURL get outta my head !
    stop peeking in my heart
    I DEFINATLEY felt this one !

    :star: :star: :star: :jumping: :star: :star: :star:
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Say it Ms. Diva. Nice as always.

    BE
     
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    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "your absence gave me immunity"

    Now that is tuff!!

    go head and say it like you wanna!!

    *diplomatic immunity*
     
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    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    diva

    gurl this is smokin!!! Shot through me like lightnining!

    ****...felt this from beginning to end...

    Don't do me no favors!! Say it gurl!!!:jumping:
     
  6. diva08

    diva08 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank y'all. i feel tha luv - i really do.

    peace and blessings

    diva08
     
  7. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u flowed this diva...

    keep the excellence coming!!!

    thoro peece.

    sean.
     
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