Black Poetry : Where the Hell Are You

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  1. blackchynadoll

    blackchynadoll Member MEMBER

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    Remember when you were always there
    And oh lets not forget the days you declared that you care
    But now your'e long gone
    I told you to put the fu**ing condom on
    Now I'm sitting in the house throwing up
    And now my family's looking at me like I'm an abandonded sl*t
    You don't even deny this is your seed
    That you planted in me
    But somehow you've forgotten about me
    and our years of history
    I'm still a baby myself
    and your'e talking about "keep it you know I'll help"
    I can't find you while your sprem is planted in me
    Who knows where you'll be at if I decide to drop this baby
    Walking around telling your boys you got a baby on the way as if your'e a celebrity
    I can't find you, your existence is nothing but a memory
    I hate you and when I'm finally able to get out this bed
    I'm a make sure my cousins shoot you dead
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WHOA ! DIS HERE WAS A BAD MEMORY OF YESTERYEAR
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa!! thats just a bad anything :eek:
     
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    [email protected],
    pure unfiltered hatred...
    this was a good scribe though
    i actually felt the loathing you gots/had/dreamed up
    for this cat
    peace
    khasm
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All too common scenario...feeling the anger/emotion in this piece.
     
  6. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thick wit emotion this one here :)
     
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