Black Poetry : where r we???

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by BlatinaPoet4u, Sep 11, 2004.

  1. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im writing this poem right now out of confusion :confused: so excuse me ahead of time if ur not feelin me!!


    U said i was ur baby but left me in the pourin rain,
    U say u love me but u stay callin me out my name,
    U want me to be the mother of ur children but u treat me like sh*t!
    How could u treat me like this when all i did was be that down @ss chick u wanted me to be?
    I loved u and still do!!!
    We had our fight and arguements and i still came back to u, U cheated on me once,
    Baby can't u see im hurtin and i don't wanna be with this new u that think ur a "G",
    Let me tell u sumthin,
    the streets ain't gonna alwayz hold ur ignorant @ss down, ******* will flip on u, ni99az will betray u, ur money ain't gon be tyte, and imma be livin my own life!!!
    U can't keep comin to me everytime a ***** play u and expect me to be here waitin wit open arms.... sh*t don't run like that. Please tell me where r we??? Am i gonna be ur baby or wut? If so please show me love! Are u gonna support me, plz. i need u to tell me now so i don't waste my tyme for sumthin thats not gonna happen. Just take this time to think about us, wut the future holds, and wut we gon be!!!


    ~I kno it might sound wack but i just had to get alot off my chest right now~ :look:
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    let it flow sister...
    poetry can be quite theraputic
    we hear you...
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You flowed with your feelings, like sage said, it can be theraputic. Emotive flow sister.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    release and flow
    for the sun will shine and shine bright
    this was a nice release

    Peace
    Angel
     
  5. toylin

    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Relax, relate, release. Say it with me. If you can write your emotions, you can release your hurt and anger. Flow, sister, flow.
     
  6. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome sista :wave: hate to see you like this :(

    nice write expression..



    believe me we all do that somethimes write our things off that is good...



    let us embrace you :luvv: that things will be better


    its not nice if someone is promising you things or keep it vageu... :maddd:


    it make you wanna kick ...... :court:

    express but find youre peace within god and lay youre case for him..
    he will guide you and show you what to do..
    if it will work out that is good if it is not than there is something better out there for you...

    Love Sis :heart:





    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
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