Black Poetry : Where November Begins...(November trilogy #1)

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  1. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How do I get to
    My November

    That place
    Where two hearts
    Make promises
    To keep

    Random
    Acts of love
    Chosen
    Before December

    Nurtured
    In the bosom
    Of Fall
    Before Winter

    How do I
    Capture
    The heart
    Of whispers

    That beat
    "I love you"
    To the rhythm
    Of multi-colored
    Leaves

    Falling
    To the ground
    In the midst
    Of a forest

    Where
    The wonders
    Of love
    Stretch beyond
    Branches

    And the
    Unspoken mystery
    Of trees

    How do I
    Say goodbye
    To this October

    And follow the path
    Where two hearts
    Become as one

    To the road
    Where we are
    Surrounded by the
    Nature of love

    That place

    Where November
    Begins...

    Hunter
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    november

    well now u come in
    with speed of light
    from the land of wisdom
    into the valley of spring
    that brings u too red oct.
    soon every tree bare no leaves
    fallin' in colours to be covered by
    snow glistning grains and there
    only there u will find ya Nov...warm heart..:heart:
     
  3. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i remember...

    another november
    when snow covered passings
    gave way to leafless trees
    as we rode down the hill
    on an avalanche of borrowed emotions

    i remember
    when tears were frozen
    by the coldness of an ocean
    of sorrows
    and i thought tomorrow
    would never be

    i remember
    the pain of yesterday
    the "i love you's"
    we would no longer say
    as we searched for another way
    to express dreams

    it seems
    tomorrow will come, after all
    just as yesterday gave way to today
    i look forward to the rise and fall
    of an embittered chest
    now filled with gladness

    i remember.

    AS ALWAYS, YOUR RIVER IS STRONG...Huntress.
    THANKS for blessing us, once again, with your heart.
     
  4. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes

    we have to move forward from the familiar and walk steadily into the unknown...

    keeping faith that we will be able to handle the road ahead..

    and believing that what will happen was meant to be....

    K
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My sista

    thank you for bringing this one again. I find these words have taken on a new meaning for me....much like when we read THE WORD...something we've meditated on before is now felt in a "new" way. Greater understanding, more light has come to me this November...

    The Spirit surely moves through your scribes, Mistress.

    thank you

    a
     
  6. epiphany

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    Hunter this is....

    So sweetly done, reminds me of the song Sweet November.
    I'm definitely likin this one.


    Epiphany :heart:
     
  7. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hunter

    You captured sooo much in this peice... Keep doin what ya do sis, you do it so well.

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Moving toward December

    It is a thought to think where that November meeting will take us, or will it take us at all--I got a lot of different feels for this one and I liked it--Amun-Ra

    Check out my new column “Dangerous Psychology When We Cheat!” at “http://www.destee.com/forums/showthread.php?threadid=4987
     
  9. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow..

    you and Alyce have this thing i can't describe in y'all's scribes.
    this was calming and beautiful.

    *awaiting December*
     
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