Black Poetry : where it began

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by skrybe7, May 11, 2003.

  1. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    for far too long
    been takin' these 'ports to the head
    foggin up my blessings
    even replacing them with
    that of the opposite extreme
    it's been way too long
    and this toxin fortified idle worshipping
    had grown way too strong
    at the end of a filter laden lit stick
    promising cancer
    and yet barely scrathin' the surface
    for way hecka too long
    been downplayin' the fact
    that God couldn't possibly want
    to dwell within a polluted temple
    one so full of ciggarette smoke
    and what a fool to put such
    a thing before God
    guess I'd be mad too
    yeah...
    and it's been way too long
    and time is overdue
    for this nightmare existance
    to find its way back to
    the original intended dream
    and irony is that it should
    end even where it began...
    man...
    it's been way too long

    (c)05/03/Michael
     
  2. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How long is long?

    it seems so long,
    bcuz u make it that way.
    undo the silence,
    speak what u WANT to say.
    it seems so long,
    bcuz u wish for it to be.
    uncover your eyes,
    so that u may see.
    it seems so long,
    bcuz there is nothing to do.
    love and peace follow,
    right behind u.
    i seems so long,
    bcuz the dayz are many.
    the love u hold,
    is nearly any.
    it seems so long,
    bcuz their is a mask of hatred on your so called friends.
    the only reason why it seems long,
    is bcuz pain and eternity aren't the end............(loved yo flow)
    ALL MAY REPLY

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  3. Khasm13

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    nice to see you back on the set dude...

    peace
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    far too long ............very nice flow
    dis took me somewhere.....let da ink drop
     
  5. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lilcherry76 I felt and loved your flow!
    been smoking ciggarettes since 17
    man oh man... way too long... lol
    17yrs and it's time to quite fo' real.
    Peace too ya.

    Thanx Khasm it's good to be back!
    And I'm lookin' foward to readin'
    them flow you be droppin'.
    peace to ya.

    Thanx Rich, it's been a trip.
    peace to ya man.
     
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