Black Poetry : Where Is My Luv

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  1. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Where is my luv, this is what i not expected,
    But i can respect him, in any way,
    I got feelings 4 dat man, he's special,
    In all da wayz a woman would eva dream,
    His kindness, his sweet personality,
    Makes him a ladies man, or not 2 be,
    I think dat he's da 1 4 me,
    I can't believe its been a year,
    Since i haven't found luv, suddenly he disappears,
    Where iz my luv, is he here,
    Will i eva find dat tru luv i've been lookin 4,
    Well, it takes da courage and patience,
    2 go out and find someone in place,
    In time of need, someone 2 hug and smile,
    Sittin under da stars on a warm blissful night,
    Where is my luv, as I echoed in da wind,
    Wonderin if he'll come 2 me,
    Can he hear my voice, callin my luv,
    Watching da moon arisin, on dis very night,
    Where is my luv, as I repeat myself,
    I see far out, dat no one is there,
    So I have 2 keep searching,
    Until I find my luv,
    Will he eva appear 2 me,
    Nuthin but a mystery, it seems 2 me,
    But I know 1 day, he'll come 2 me,
    And tell me how much he luvs me,
    4rm da bottom of his heart,
    Shall it neva break,
    Shall dis very night,
    Neva end dis way, without me saying goodbye,
    Until anotha day, may i say farewell,
    But as I wait, only time will tell.

    Aaliyahmonet
     
  2. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dis poem was dedicated 2 all da fellas who are looking 4 dat special someone. She'll come 2 ya, it's only a matta of time.:)

    Aaliyahmonet
     
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    You know I like this.......
     
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    OmoObatala Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was special! :)
     
  5. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks bishop and exodus.

    Much Luv,

    Aaliyahmonet:)
     
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    Aali "ya "hmonet !i,m feeling "ya" sissa!

    hope he,s already there with 'ya' or i
    hope he will come soon to 'ya"

    personal i feld this nice peace!

    sister liberty ... much love to 'ya"
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed dis took me in like pure love
    and i read again & again !
    forth i am not far
    just two stars away
    in my flyte i hear ya voice
    it's a luv choice i trace
    so now i show my face
    let it be too take it's place
     
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    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Liberty-Thankyou for the kind words:)
    Rich- What can i do without you? Thanks again.:)

    Aaliyahmonet
     
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    and again i smile ! as i fly awayyyyy)))))))>>
     
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