Black Poetry : Where is my King?

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  1. Intrepid

    Intrepid Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Where is my king?
    The one who wipes away my tears
    Safeguards my fears
    Holds me and makes me feel safe
    Loves me with all my faults, imperfections and insecurities
    Doesn't judge me because I am not perfect.
    Supports and encourages
    Is my backbone
    My strong hold
    The source of my strength
    Lets me know it is okay when the world throws daggers from all directions
    He's my friend, my lover, my confidane,
    My king
    Your queen awaits you​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    surely he's near have no fear dear
    thy king abound wit solid compound
    if he don't arrive look high in da shy
    from flyte to your heart delight
    set sight on the above love to comfort u
    cover and shower u too treat u right
    give ya soul a sweet delight feel ya
    compassion wit humble affection
    listen intently be supportive , understand
    sho u what a true real man
    carry u when u seem to fall
    hold u at the wink of a call
    caress ya fears kiss away ya tears
    bring u joy and a whole lot more
    a friend a lover a king to uncover
    be a hope a guiding star take u
    up above in the cardle of love
    look up forth one's there !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    This was a very nice flow had me all up in it tyte drop intrepid
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautifully written...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was deeply felt, something many would love to have. He'll more than likely appear when you least expect, perhaps you have already met him. Flow on.
     
  5. Intrepid

    Intrepid Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks to all for the feedback
    Just let my king know his queen is still awaiting :D
     
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    The King that you require, has been with you all the time. Reach in, anytime.
    I loved the write up.
     
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    Nisa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow..i totally feel and understand this piece. I wanna know the answer to that question too. Thanks for sharing. Ishmael Ishmael...Where for art thou Ishmael
     
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    Imperfection makes us whole my Queen ~

    Very nice scribe!
     
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    Intrepid Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you
    Thank you
    Thank you
    Thnak you all
     
  10. certainty

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    beautiful question

    Maybe your king is
    in the first star you see rising

    or in the sigh of wind
    over your skin in summer -

    where ever he is,
    it is a beautiful asking
    you have posted here.

    I loved reading your poem.
     
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