Black Poetry : where is my justice....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seems like a perfect justice…
    But where’s mine…
    Walls closed in…
    Tight in a room..
    Cant bare the gloom…
    Where’s my justice at…
    Lost in a world with no shame…
    Justice lost
    Just got toss…
    And who’s ta blame….
    A fight not of dis world…
    Hidden in our mind…
    The struggle so hard….
    Wasn’t our fight
    We fight for now….
    Break the block…
    Open your mind….
    Fix the problem of you….
    One minded…wont heal….
    Justice….


    a blkangel thang






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  2. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Good work scribe!

    This was a spectacular piece...as always when something profound hits the boards the like minded will find their way to you....
    Keep on scribing and vibing, in the knowing is the growing!

    Blessings On Your House!
     
  3. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    this is a good question
    and a good scribe
    tyte
    peace
    khasm
     
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    tyte girl...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i often seek my justice of the poetic walls of reasons
    in the mist the light shine within u fine ya way home
    justice of mental thoughts is a grasp away ...reach !!
    u shall touch it and feel it ....ya justice is mindfully close
    tyte scribe poetess
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    msluciousb...thank you...i guess it do have away of gettin around...peace...

    Khasm13...thanks for droppin by...glad ya like it...

    Olakuoto... thanks for the read...

    LovelyGoldenOne..girl thank you means alot

    $$RICH$$....you thank you for all your support from being to now...love ya man....i am glad ya like it....


    :toast: yall
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very deep sistah
    much love
    Peace
     
  8. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was flamin' gurl......I like that. I wished I had yo skillz gurl. That was off tha chainz fo sho'.
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bluewater...thanks for the read

    foxylady30315...you do have skillz to i like your stuff as well...thanks for the read
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    word to this sentiment right here, sistah. diggin this piece.
     
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