Black Poetry : " where is love "

j'hiah

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where is love
how long does it last
is it only an ingredient for truth
or a plate at the table of a simple, inviting experience
did i find it in her, that and it too??
i did. now it's gone
what took it from me??
if it were destiny i didn't know she was a thief,
rather kind or not...
most of my life has been directed by my own will
and not far less by the will of others
of others?? you name it.. places, things, people who can say you're hired
or you're fired- all of these determinants of your next direction...

l don't know what led me to you, my queen of my life,
i didn't see love coming to me along these spiraling patterns in my life...
lf it was truth, l believe in it
lf it was destiny, l now believe in possibilities
lf it was time, l no longer believe or think it is aimless
but since is was love, i now know where all these entities have tried to bring me for so long and that's to you
and love will be with me whereever l go and when l am gone..
 
where is love
how long does it last
is it only an ingredient for truth
or a plate at the table of a simple, inviting experience
did i find it in her, that and it too??
i did. now it's gone
what took it from me??
if it were destiny i didn't know she was a thief,
rather kind or not...
most of my life has been directed by my own will
and not far less by the will of others
of others?? you name it.. places, things, people who can say you're hired
or you're fired- all of these determinants of your next direction...

l don't know what led me to you, my queen of my life,
i didn't see love coming to me along these spiraling patterns in my life...
lf it was truth, l believe in it
lf it was destiny, l now believe in possibilities
lf it was time, l no longer believe or think it is aimless
but since is was love, i now know where all these entities have tried to bring me for so long and that's to you
and love will be with me whereever l go and when l am gone..

Very Nice Flow

I like this flow because after being led around by all the determinants. The truth was discovered and in you poet will live forever. You pinned it well.

i now know where all these entities have tried to bring me for so long and that's to you

I liked that love is
a simple, inviting experience.
In all it's complexity. The focus is to recall just that. No guarantees, no returns. But you must make the deposit or never experience it.

Keep sharing.
 

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