Black Haiku : where is baby goddess

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  1. TotalView

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    eve is in the mud
    her halo tilted, with God's
    slingshot hurling stars

    © Kiwanda Paul
     
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    .......Very glad I stopped by and digested this piece TotalView, another excellent write.
     
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    View of her halo
    reveil her rise from below
    sparkling like starz
     
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    Brother Clyde,

    Thanks for stopping by and leaving words. I always run to answer the door when I know it's you knocking. (smile)
     
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    Nicely done, Haiku King.

    I'll be back shortly. (smile)
     
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    .......TotatView, TotalView, thank you for answering, really.
     
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    wow.
     
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