Black Poetry : where I'm comin' from

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by skrybe7, Jun 28, 2003.

  1. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    See you have to understand
    I'm comin' from a place of
    care and caution
    see, trust is all the way
    out the window
    and walkin' into things blind
    was never my thing
    I mean I seen
    so many games
    heard so many lies
    so many ways malice tries
    to do you in
    so from a blind spot
    how could I begin
    to consider love?
    Doesn't mean that you
    ain't tyte
    your words your vibe
    and all you present
    but without time spent
    in your eyes
    how can I truly know
    if you ain't right?
    see you gotta feel me
    and what's that mean if you don't?
    So there it is...

    (c)06/03/Michael
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know what you mean …hearing you clearly..deep vibration in your flow…i feel it
    Peace
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow...
     
  4. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx Bluewater and Lovely
    Much love to ya'll
     
  5. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel where ya comin from boo.
    Beautifully written.

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  6. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx Play.
    I'm glad you feel me.
    Peace
     
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