Black Poetry : Where I Leech

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THEONE, Apr 12, 2004.

  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :angel1: Confused! Torn between two lifes
    Right? Wrong? Which do I fight?
    Help myself! Help others?
    Baffled unguided, mind in the gutter
    Left? Right? Detours all around
    No sign of resolution! No feel of even ground!
    Perplexing, mind bending! So distrought
    A mouse trapped in a maze! Seems as if Ive forgot
    Up? Down? Who's to say?
    Chaos! Anxiety! Hopefully just a phase
    Who do I call to? Where do I run?
    Think, Think, I know The ONE
    Ill fall to my knees, Do as Ive been told
    Ask God for forgiveness, a way from this hole
    Repent, let him know, A sheeps went astray
    Dark, dismal nights on my knees Ill stay
    Praying to the Lord, for this is the only way
    Hoorah! Hoooorah! Awaken a new day
    Temptation no longer! Sunshine not somber
    Peace within oneself, Mans most enjoyable wealth
    Dismal days, but it never storms
    The only rain is to even the warm
    The title to this piece " A Bible is Where I Leeche!"
    Happiness and Joy was all in arms reached!!



    Copyrighted By: L. Johnson All Rights Reserved
     
  2. soblessed

    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte flow.this was very powerful and moving.I really can relate to this.
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Uncertainty lies where God has been forgotten, wonderfully written.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well pose this awesome flow hit it on da head
    tyte write
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love this poem I can relate to this feeling so messed up inside just let it all go and find my way out good read.
     
  6. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thnks all,
     
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    Amen...Amen...and Aaaaaaaaaaaaaamen...

    Nuff Said...


    I loved it ^5
     
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    Loving this! A powerful message
    you just laid here!
    Definately one to grow
    on!
     
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