Black Poetry : Where Do We Start?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Amun-Ra, Oct 4, 2002.

  1. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wet, warm simplicity's succulence.
    Deep, smooth perfect passage lined
    silk, savory massage meanders along
    hardened handrails within humid confines.

    Damp, dark corridors, unlit and unmarked
    are audacious yet safe to a gentle touch
    leading, long thoughts of lovingness
    into inner recesses, where navels twitch.

    Fullness follows expanded cavern walls,
    explicit exploration's motherloade vein
    mines mental pictures, pink and tepid
    to touch, yet burning with inner rain.

    Drip, drop surge against the bottom
    rolling, river of life flow into delta's loam
    packing promises of further truthful living
    creating, carrying life floating on sea foam.
     
  2. Nia Maishani

    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whaaaaaa???

    No, don't answer; just rhetorical--I know EXACTLY what. Now see, this is what I'm talking about (I don't know what anybody ELSE is talking about, but) this is it! Start right THERE. RIGHT...there, Scribe.
     
  3. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hiding

    Was trying to hide it all behind some sultry words, but it was an exploration just as you figured--Ra

    :)
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yessuh!

    alyce
     
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    RA!!! See this is why I've always revered you th Master Scribe of all scribes!!!! Bishop knows what you be talking bout bruh!!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    once again u came to teach da word play i feel ya & know where
    dis going indeed ya the MASTER of flow....
     
  7. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I Be Thinking Weird

    I thanks all of you for your reads--this was one that was close to me--Ra

    :)
     
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    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NOW I KNOW.... why i feel this need to genuflect in your presence...

    and that ws rather sultry...
     
  9. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Personal

    It was a piece for my wife and she liked it also--Ra

    :cool:
     
  10. DaFlavaFul

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    Yo! i been telling yall about Ra! yall aint hear me yet . this here is sensuality and imagery wrapped up to make beautiful poetry. Tyght!
     
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