Black Poetry : Where Do We Go From Here

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Sista Steele, Jan 27, 2003.

  1. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Laying in wait
    Acknowledging my fear
    Strong feelings and emotion
    So difficult to bear

    I’ve reached out to you
    Expressing my thoughts
    We needed some space
    I’m sorry we fought

    My phone sits silent
    The door stands still
    The next episode looms
    Do we continue
    Do we dare

    Stated desires
    Unselfish wants
    The anticipation is great
    Felt deep in my walls

    What happens next
    Who makes the first move
    An honest response
    The only thing needed from you

    Please hold me close
    Whisper in my ear
    Tell me you love me
    Do you see it
    Is it clear


    c 2002 ST
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    *playin' instrumental music*

    i forgot who sang this song :lol:

    tight flow sista' keep it coming

    :toast:

    pd
     
  3. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RayJ has a song with the same title actually. It just fit! Thanks PD.
     
  4. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nicely written

    one luv
     
  5. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mind~$oul, thanks.
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Snap,snap,snap and a booty clap!

    Girl do you hear my fingers snapping do you see me slap my hip, do you see me smile at your lyrical wonder...do you see me go on this trip...I love your empathetic soul...scribe da love vibe. Can't wait to see what you throw down in the challenge in February, Gurl you are da bombdiggity! ( I know it's outdated) but it fit!
    Lov ya chile you got true Sista style...you was who I was talking about when I wrote that poem today! Take a peep when you have time.

    Blessings On Ya House!:toast: :toast:
     
  7. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Word? Thanks Mslb. I seent that one and gave sum well deserved luv.
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i wonder what happens next

    nice love poem poet

    DSS
     
  9. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Maybe I'll make a part II. hmmm. thanks DSS.
     
  10. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Double S...

    Very nice, heartfelt flow...does sound like a sequel is forthcoming...

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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