Black Poetry : Where Did U Come From?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Jun 6, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    See baby ive traveled many places
    searched so wide and far
    ive touched the sun
    and looked at all the men in mars

    i even went searchin in venus
    to see what all the talk was about
    but i guess it wasnt my cup of tea
    cuz i spit them herbal leaves right back out

    then i tried to be solo
    that only works for a couple months tops
    cuz a woman wants to b touched
    and doin it myself never does the job

    then i went for them ballas
    that can only pay my pockets
    i never wanted his love
    just some of his chedda that fattens his wallet

    i got tired of that and went to the pretty dudes
    even tho they might not be able to afford me
    but i need some aggression in my life
    and he stayed in the mirror more than me

    then u come in my life unexpected
    i dont even think u have a category
    ur unique, one of a kind
    better than great, more than satisfactory

    tell me, where did u come from?
    u got me over here strung out n bent alittle
    did god make u for me?
    or does this just happened to b coincidental?

    cuz just when i was done with my search, here u come....
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm lovin' this...
     
  3. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was a really nice poem... i like


    peace
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovin it as always
     
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    this was cute :)
     
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    Why is it when your're not lookin love seems to find you?
    Feelin and lovin this! Tyte!
     
  7. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you yall.
     
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