Black Poetry : Where Did he Go ?

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  1. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some may not know him,
    for now he's just a ghost...
    but it's good to read his words,
    so please click on his post.
    He would drop wisdom,
    and sometimes too bright...
    for those in the darkness,
    became blinded by the light.
    He would lay it down raw,
    but truth is that way.
    Since he's been gone,
    I've missed the words he would say.
    He used to inspire me,
    with the things he would feel,
    made me step up my pen,
    always keeping it real.
    So I wrote this little poem
    for those who never heard,
    the lines and the wisdom
    of my brother "BLACK VERB".
    He kept it rough and right,
    with an intense flow...
    can someone please tell me,
    just where did he go ?

    ONE LUV !
    KEITA OTIBA KENYATTA​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed he's one of a kind
    a brutha to rock ya mind
    he come deep tyte and right
    u know he take u from
    darkness to light he's alright
    surely he will feel da depth
    of da call and drop a flow
    to let us know he's no ghost
     
  3. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I would like to know that myself? I have been a fan of his writings for over 3 years. Truly enjoyed your poem. Hopefully, he will sense our yearning through this beautiful piece, to read him again. :glasses:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i am sure he be back
    soon very soon
    QQ where u be blakverb????
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, I liked the way you brought this verse. I have been wondering myself, what happened to that talented brother?
     
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