Black Poetry : Where did Debbie go?

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  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Where did Debbie go?
    ""I dont know...""
    Marlyn where did Debbie Go?
    ""I dont know....""
    Carla ; yeah i know..
    i saw her leave with some guy named Jayro.
    .
    ...WOW!


    Where did Debbie go?
    ""i dont know.."'
    Where did Debbie go?
    "'i realy dont know""
    Carla ; o yeahy now i know she said she would leave..
    i think his name is Jo..


    ...... O!


    Next day caught Debbie on the phone..
    Debbie ..last night where did you go
    you just left...?
    D; "'dont worry i can take care of myself"
    We talked about this.. dont ya think its wrong ??
    D; "'didnt you heard me ... i can take care of my own"'
    I have good intentions,i love you ,thats not wrong..?
    D; ""i know ..i know"" but its my life you cant control..
    oeps duty calls sorry sweety i gotta go""

    Where did Debbie go?!!!
    where did she go ?!!
    Carla;"" same o same o.
    i dont know,i think i saw her leave with a man named Jerome""
    yeah but where did she go?
    Carla; "'i heard him say ' my home"

    .....O NO!


    Where did Debbie go?!!
    O,my Where did Debbie go?!!!!!!!
    Carla;how do i supposed to know..........She just UP ANd GO!


    .....O my LoRd!



    i feld it in my bones...
    The next day..
    it was I who had to
    tell Them...
    tell Them..
    all..


    That Debbie is gone..............................
     
  2. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i just wanted to say respect for these names...
    because i just choose some names...
    i hope you know what i mean..
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

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    very nice flow....unique too...i like it alot...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well done i like dis piece
     
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    What a tragic end! Debbie left with the intentions of fun. Now Debbie is gone! Debbie is gone! Heartfelt Liberty! Never trust a stanger!
     
  6. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks Rich,Lovely,Purp :heart:




    Love L
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome sistah Queen
     
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    tyte flow L:)
     
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