Black Poetry : Where Did Da Feelin Go !

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Tonight i can lose myself
    in the thoughts of what was
    as tyme move feelings dem
    the candle that burns
    has burned out

    where did da feelins go ?

    from the start u cross me
    at the end u disrespect me
    i can lose my mind tonight
    but i'm strong
    i put up a fight
    i don't feel the magic
    i still see the old habits

    where did the feelin go ?

    didn't u see my love
    and how open
    as it hug u to safety
    but u turn away
    blamming me of some dis ray
    something that had no say

    where did the feelings go ?

    my love was a game
    u sit and call me names
    well i have news for u
    the tyme is now
    even as it feels so bad
    the light is out
    i stay no more
    the hurt may be
    but i will seek to be happy
    but !
    where did the feelings go ?:(

    a piece i felt for a dear friend of mines
    who are going through a painful and crazy motional thing
    surely one so whom cast the stone and laugh shall
    last cry in the tears of greater love lost unto a new life
    may ya heart mend faster then tyme it self and the
    new compromised love abound u in comfort to move the last
    pain and scar from ya heart to feel loved.........i'm in your corner
    and their for u always ......our day will come .:) :heart:
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hope those scars heal..for your friend :wave:
     
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    tell your friend that life experiences
    is a lesson to be taught
    take a look inside themself
    theres a message to be saught
    learn and grow
    teach and move
    theres better days in store
    but most important
    to keep the faith
    For GOD will bless them more

    I feel your concern! They have a good friend to lean on! Tyte scribe!
     
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    yes cindy a new day will caress the old face in grace
    wit pure love & bond

    swtT...........surely my friend will come to pass and move unto
    a new love to be proud of ....Thankz

    purple ......thank u yes my friend can lean on me
    forth one not alone but beloved in me .
     
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    yes cindy u feelin me here !
    wordz speak openly
     
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