Quiet Poetry Lounge : Where Are You?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PositiveMindset, Nov 30, 2003.

  1. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When I look at U I get overwhelmed by so many emotions.
    Love, want, bliss, security, devotion.
    I think of what I've been through with past relationships.
    I visualize my future & you're the one I'm elated with.

    Taking long walks in the park, getting aquainted with each other's minds.
    Giving more love in one starlit evening than some get in a lifetime.
    When you're around, I'm oblivious 2 anything else.
    You've made me take off my warrior's garb lay them on the shelf.

    I've redefined myself, taking on a calmer, softer persona.
    I've offered my heart 2 others before, but you're destined 2 be it's owner.
    I love 2 sit in front of U and gaze into your eyes.
    When I see the smile on your face, I know what it means 2 truly be alive.

    Just speak 2 me, say the alphabet, I love listening 2 your voice.
    If I was stranded on an island with 2 necessities, you'd be my 1st choice.
    U are the water that I drink, the air that I breathe.
    U are my better half, the yen 2 my yang, without U I'm incomplete.

    Eve was created 2 be a mate 4 Adam, that was God's grand design.
    In every empire a King has his Queen, & I'm in need of mine.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love da flava here this was well done .....very nice
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and she is in need of you
    beautiful scribe
    as the warrior wish to rest his shield
    and be with is Queen
    I am touch profoundly
    by this blissful scribe
    Peace
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i am diggin this flow..nice very nice indeed:angel1:
     
  5. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I humbly thank U all.

    Just tryin' 2 let the softer, more lovin' side of Positive shine 4 a while.
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A wonderful and caring piece.
     
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