Black Poetry : Where are you tonight?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Alizentang, Aug 7, 2003.

  1. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Every morning I think of you I just can't shake off my dreams
    Pain, tears, and death are all I see, I need to know what it means
    So I drop to my knees, I hope and I pray
    Where are you baby? Please please be okay
    Even though your gone and I've had my time to chill
    It still cuts like a knife, because without knowing it my:heart: you've killed
    I couldn't take losing you, losing you to these streets alone
    It's hell on earth out here, Death is out to greet and take you home
    Every night I go to sleep, nothing but tears in my eyes
    Ask the Lord to keep you, whisper a wish on all the stars in the sky
    "Please don't take my baby, I'm not ready to say Goodbye"
    Beg god to tell you I love you, close my eyes and say goodnight
     
  2. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I've got writer's block, so I had to go into MY archives for this one:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt too.........da block is a myth
    ya pen is stronger i've felt ya vibe
    and watch u scribe so shake it fast
    dis thing call da block won't last
    flow on ! sis....
     
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    Feeling the emotion in this, archived or not, it was hot!
     
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    Alize, its still a hot one :confused: How did I miss this one ? :)
     
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    indeed felt all ya emotions and tention flowing
    da block is a myth of da mental
    free ya mind as da rest will come and let ya hand n' pen
    stroll from da vision u pose and the myth of a writers block
    shall and will be lifted ........gone !
    flow sistah gurl ....i'm beside u alwayz
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [email protected] mijita this was...felt...so real :)
     
  9. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece was so nice....... Poetry comes naturally well that's what I heard...... so let it come out...... Keep writing..
     
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    dayum dis is hot loved it
    much love
    -story
     
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