Black Poetry : WHERE ARE YOU NOW?(ii.EDIT.)

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  1. MacGeo

    MacGeo Active Member MEMBER

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    WHERE 'RE YOU NOW?

    Down with 'u i dwell in times of dispair;
    Your pain and sorrow will i pair;
    Into my flesh you stick like a thorn;
    Together we dwell 'n apart we can't be torn;

    In moments of distress i weep;
    All your sins in my way will i sweep;
    And each time your 're hurt i cry;
    Yes, every time 'n always u to love i try;

    'Cause i know forever you're mine;
    Even as i know not what's up on your mind;
    But i want you to live and love only me;
    No, charm and magic i don't need;

    From gabbage and mud were you rescued;
    That i raised 'u from grass to grace 'u refuse;
    'Cause in gold and diamond you now swim;
    Yes gone are the days of thick and thin;

    Even as you now dwell in glass and marble;
    What i truely deserve is what i marvel;
    OOh;love, respect 'n happiness i truely deserve;
    But now with insults and shame am i served;

    No,but charm and magic i need not;
    For the invincible power of faith i've got;
    'U said you'll be there for me always;
    Now i wait and waste to no avail;

    Float 'n spread with monsters 'n jazebels;
    But i know the heavens will someday rebell;
    And due to me what i truely desreve;
    Only what i deserve will i conserve.

    WRITTEN BY NZEGGE GEO' (MacGEO)
    HOLLAND


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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u captured a masterpiece here
    very nice
     
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    love, respect 'n happiness i truely deserve;
    But now with insults and shame am i served;

    sometimes after all we've given, "they" forget from where it all started
    becoming selfish in love........but the faith you speak of...will
    always prevail

    felt,
    angelic
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this reads like a song lol :) i like it :)
     
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