Black Poetry : Where Are U?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PositiveMindset, Dec 22, 2003.

  1. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When I look at U I get overwhelmed by so many emotions.
    Love, want, bliss, security, devotion.
    I think of what I've been through with past relationships.
    I visualize my future & you're the one I'm elated with.

    Taking long walks in the park, getting aquainted with each other's minds.
    Giving more love in one starlit evening than some get in a lifetime.
    When you're around, I'm oblivious 2 anything else.
    You've made me take off my warrior's garb lay them on the shelf.

    I've redefined myself, taking on a calmer, softer persona.
    I've offered my heart 2 others before, but you're destined 2 be it's owner.
    I love 2 sit in front of U and gaze into your eyes.
    When I see the smile on your face, I know what it means 2 truly be alive.

    Just speak 2 me, say the alphabet, I love listening 2 your voice.
    If I was stranded on an island with 2 necessities, you'd be my 1st choice.
    U are the water that I drink, the air that I breathe.
    U are my better half, the yen 2 my yang, without U I'm incomplete.

    Eve was created 2 be a mate 4 Adam, that was God's grand design.
    In every empire a King has his Queen, & I'm in need of mine.
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    heartfelt scribe my brotha...
    keep it coming
    one love
    khasm
     
  3. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is just beautifull..









    Love L
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop like how u did this one
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    likes this scribe
    indeed nice drop...
     
  6. Bluewater

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    this is indeed a lovely poem from the heart....
    nice feeling coming from this flow
    wonderful
    Peace
     
  7. gempis

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    awwwww
    this is so very touching, Pos. she is a lucky woman
     
  8. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank U 4 the feel, fam, but gempis, there is no lucky lady, just a vision.
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That vision must be your soulmate. This was so wonderfully posed.
     
  10. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aawwww this was soooo beautiful
    GOD BLESS :D
     
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