Black Poetry : When's It Gonna' Be

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  1. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If not today
    Tell me when....
    When will everything be just peachy and fine
    So sublime and sending me high
    On a cloud I am right now loving this feeling
    This swoon of X-stacy
    Over coming my being making me feel like I'm OD'ing
    I can't explain why my smile is about a mile
    I can't explain why my heart seems to skip a beat while.....
    Everything else around me seems to want to steal my peace of mind
    I tried to do something different today to change
    Instead yaw wanna know what they called me?
    Weird and strange.
    Yaw wanna know what I did back?
    I laughed so hard I thought my glass was gone crack
    I don't care if they call me India or one of those dreadlock people
    Wanna know why CUZ THEM IS MY PEOPLE
    My spirituality is just so so so right
    I see better in the light,but I feel at ease at night
    Not because I get to hide
    Into my own place my dark sheets
    But because that's where my thoughts and my calls to the Lord meets
    I am at peace with myself and those around me because I took the time
    To read my own mind
    I know what pleases me and turns my smiles upside down
    I know what taste like Peaches and makes me throw up
    All because I'm trying to grow up
    My way,my own special way
    I'm still on that cloud
    When will they be?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    strong flow the asking when !
    soon very soon
    tyte sis.....
     
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    Thank you so much Rich I just feel at ease today and happy:wave:
     
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    great u writting happy and free flow on sis.........
     
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    Some folks will always be ten paces behind you. So be it, they'll forever walk in your shadow. I liked this piece, stay positive.
     
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    Thanx Watz and I will always try to stay ahead and ready...always positive:wink: