Black Poetry : When

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  1. skrybble7

    skrybble7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When it’s over and men are the harvest moon,
    are rainbows and women as the rain,
    and the world is awash in the life of yesterday
    will you see the faint glow?
    The promise of tomorrow in today?
    When it is said and done and forever calls
    the course of every castle constructed by the hands
    of time and tide
    Will your arms be open wide?
    Even as the desolate spaces that answer the call of crows and ravens
    Embracing open sky will you be denied?
    When it’s over and a quiet dawn weaves and bends it’s rays about the clouds
    mountains and trees to gingerly turn the swarthy hues of my solemn solitude
    when it’s over and men are oaks in the desert and women as
    the dunes that roll low from here to the horizon
    blown in an arid breeze will you finally be free?

    Map ‘05
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If not THEN...

    I see the promise of tomorrow in your work today.

    Thanks for sharing the gift. :darts:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I second that this is proof to tomorrow to come .....

    I really like how u created this for the( when it happen )
    keep speaking i'm listening to ya !
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YES MY BRATAH I WILL BE FREE...LOL
    I WAS FEELIN YO DROP
    SO FLO ON
    VERY NICE WRITTEN



    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
  5. skrybble7

    skrybble7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks 1Poet. I always appreciate your reading me.
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    Thanks for taking the time to listen to a brotha, Rich.
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    Thanks Ms. G.A.. Here's to some freedom. lol
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    im sorry i missed this love loved the flo this deserves a big fat kiss:smooch:
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo, I know how you feel brah, all you can do is lift your head and keep walking proud. Tight drop
     
  8. skrybble7

    skrybble7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the love Nevar, you know I always appreciate it.

    Thanks Defiantson for reading and commenting

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