Black Poetry : When?

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  1. baglady

    baglady Member MEMBER

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    When are you coming Father?
    I wish You'd hurry.
    I'm not trying to rush
    But I want to come home dearly
    Me
    Myself
    & I
    Are so tired o being weary
    I try to have faith
    But sometimes it seems You don't hear me
    Though I walk thru the valley of the shadow of death
    It's so hard to walk when i cant feel your breath
    Breath of Life
    Breath of Love
    Precious breath, like a hug.
    I know I should be lookin @ the bigger picture
    And i thank you for your angel "HODEE"
    Havin me get back on track wit Cha...
    So i'll sweep these feeling under the rug
    and replace them with thoughts of your everlasting love
     
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    this was a touchin poem...
    it sounds like u do see da biga picture...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    monad.poetress Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :luv: very touching
    very nice piece


    Monad.poetress
     
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    I can say that I have been at that desperate door before, an this piece emotes this feeling quite well. You never know when and how and angel will show up. God works in mysterious ways. Peace.