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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Dior Robynsonne, May 2, 2004.

  1. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When all is said
    and done,
    When all of the moons
    have completed their many
    phases,
    When Pluto becomes warm,
    and Venus becomes dark as night,
    When the wind blows
    heavenward,
    and the skylark sings to the
    bowlels of hell,
    When Mother Earth hides
    her face in her hands and
    tears of blood streams from her
    eyes and the roots of her hair;
    when the voice of the world is silenced,
    and the animals become quiet,
    When all is ended and there resides nothing
    but the feel of anticipation,
    What will I have accomplished?
    And in the end will it have been
    for something?
    Or will I have to wait for
    when that happens?

    Copyright 2004 Anno Domini/ "Earth's Wynne" Publishing
    ~Dior X. Robynsonne
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ya pen on fire ...tyte drop
    hey been look for u to drop in on the
    poet of the week thread and drop some love
     
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    very nice
    feelin the flow
    nice drop
     
  4. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Rich and Thank you Angel. I will be sure to drop in and drop my brand of love for you all.
     
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    Vivid images here, and much to ponder.
     
  6. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for your love it is very much heartfelt as always.
     
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    gosh...
    just make you wanna say Hmmm
    nice poem...wakening the mind
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :spinn: :spinn: :spinn: Thank you beautiful blue :spinn: :spinn: :spinn:
     
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    this was an incredible journey...
    great abstract imagery
    powerfully, thought provoking ending...

    Brilliant Work!
     
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    Dior Robynsonne,
    nice poetic rendering, very expressive, captivating write......
    i enjoy your style.....

    Peace and Blessings