Black Poetry : when you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by wildflower7, May 2, 2001.

  1. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when you cry, i feel the pain, i feel the tears as they drip down
    my cheeks, i feel even the gulps of breath between each sob.
    when your heart breaks, the sharp pain pounds in my chest and
    air chokes in my throat.
    when you frown, all the muscles in my face stretch and cramp
    and i can't breathe when you swim under water.
    i get real cold when you walk outside without a jacket and real
    hot when you sleep with the heat on.
    when you smile, i'm warm and content inside and i feel good.
    when you go exploring, i feel educated.
    when you ***** your finger, i bleed.
    when you burn your hand, my skin melts.
    when you close your eyes, i can't see.
    when you taste me, i get wet.
    when you come inside me slow, inch-by-inch, i come five times.
    when you hold me, i feel secure.
    when you caress my breasts, my heart beats fast.
    when you kiss me, i'm sure that your lips are the only ones i want touching mine.
    when i'm with you, i don't want to be somplace else.
    when you explode inside me, i want to be fertilized.
    when you leave me forever, i stop existing like this.
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alrighty Then....

    Bishop likes this one.........Very much so!!!
     
  3. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    waaaaaay toooo to two tue ha ha ha hot
    umm umm
    Thanks poet
     
  4. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fellas

    i'm glad you liked the ode to my man ;).
    -7
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oooouuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!

    feelin all dis heah, missy -7!

    DIZZAYUMMMMMMMMMMMMM :D


    A
     
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    a self-aware sistah.

    explaining it all.

    THANKS.
     
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    when you inhale I imagine I am the dissipated
    aroma that soothes your soul
    when YOU smile I am that crease at the side of your
    mouth kissing every word that escapes to grace your
    sound engaged to anothers ear
    when you sweat I am rinsed and am freed from daily
    stress and strife
    when you sleep I am a dream waiting to occur to dance
    on your subliminal screens and roll my credits that
    contain only your name
    my leading actress/my supporting actress
    no other roles matter

    when you are you I am a child standing in the
    aisles of ten feet high shelves of confections
    laughing a blissful shrill of happiness.

    W7,

    it's a rough follow up I'm just knocking off the rust.

    one love,blak
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wild

    Mami keep em comin! lovin this hea...

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
  9. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in agreement

    with the family on this here
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dayuuuum WF!!!!!!!!!!

    When ya flow like so, it's a beautiful thang!!!

    Enjoyed this!!!

    :heart:
    GQ