Black Poetry : When you read this call me!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Nov 28, 2007.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The end of another year.

    mon cherie

    I am thinking of you.

    Your Birthday is this week.
    I wonder who you will be with.

    I often think, one day it will again be me.
    I hope I don’t get caught off guard
    when you say hello!

    I know the words I probably should say.
    They sound kind of plain, from my heart they convey.
    You know I have always been truthful with you.

    Years have passed, please forgive me.

    I still do love you!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hodee, I found this to be quite touching, just a genuinely heartfelt flow.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes...I'm now a year wiser and I'm so glad I made it too,
    didn't think that it was possible with the pain you put me through

    Who I'm with is un-important at this time
    it could have been you, had you treated me kind.

    Well, it will be a pleasure to see your face again
    I'll introduce you to my brand new friend.

    Hey, did I hear you say, you still love ME?
    when FREE was all you really wanted to be?

    Did the grass look GREENER ...on the other side?
    while I laid here night after night and cried?

    See, when my best wasn't good enough, it was time to split the scene,
    yes, that was the turning point for this once in a life time Queen!​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    another year in a greater mode .....this was deeply felt and touched bruh !
     
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