Black Poetry : When you love someone

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  1. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When you love someone so deep inside,
    It seems like it's so easy to hide.
    You've loved him for so very long,
    You would think he could do no wrong.

    Every day you would hope and pray,
    That he would always stay this way.
    He treated you like you should be treated,
    You thought your life was finally completed.

    You thought your love was growing true,
    And then one day it was all so blue.
    He started putting you down and it hurt,
    You thought all you were to him was dirt.

    He started ignoring you and you wondered why,
    All you wanted to do was curl up and die.
    You thought your relationship would never end,
    But that was all so fake and pretend.

    One night he was so sweet to you,
    You thought all those things were maybe untrue,
    Two days later he was back the same,
    You thought you were the one to blame.

    He thought the relationship was getting too serious
    And that you had become a little too curious.
    By this time you knew it wouldn't last,
    All the nice things he said were in the past.

    You thought that you would marry him some day,
    But this time God wanted to get his way.
    You wanted things back how they were before,
    But you knew this couldn't happen anymore.

    It was a Saturday night about ten o'clock,
    You heard the news and it wasn't a shock.
    You knew this was going to happen soon,
    As you laid there and cried in the pale lit moon
     
  2. Khasm13

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    blatina
    nice to see you back
    could you please address the issue that arose
    from the poem some servant to God
    we have been waiting patiently for your response...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice.................
     
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    Froggy1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    blatina is niiiice with it thats fosho
     
  5. guttapoetfromny

    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you hit the spot

    man i can defiantely relate to this here. i mean everything you were sayin i went through. much love, and flow on with ya bad self!!!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    With love we never quite know what is going to happen, and when it goes wrong, the pain is deep. Nice to read something from you again.
     
  7. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thnx ya'll

    Man, it sure feels good to be back here in the states, and again i apologize to all whom was offended and thnx ya'll for always showin me nuttin but love and at this point in my life i really need it so much has happened in these past few months.


    Miss Destee,

    I thank you so much u've done to get this mess straightened out it means alot to me and i just want you and the rest of the moderators to know that i love all of you and thanks for being so understanding!!!! :flowers:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome back home we missed u too and happy all matters resolved

    thank u .................
     
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