Black Poetry : When You Lay Down

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  1. 1SensualBrotha

    1SensualBrotha Member MEMBER

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    When you lay down at night,
    And close your eyes,
    Can you feel the caress of my hands
    Against your inner thighs?
    Can you feel the tips of my fingers,
    As my lips slowly linger,
    To a place I like to call paradise?
    Now, I want you to feel my flickering tongue,
    Let me taste your juices as they coat my lungs.
    Go ahead baby, put your hands on my bald head,
    And show me how much of this you want to be fed.
    I can tell you like it by the sway in your hips.
    Can you tell I’m thirsty,
    By my slow, provocative sips?

    Now, I’m ready to come inside;
    Let me hold your legs open wide.
    Wrap them around and hold my body tight;
    Feel the force of my plunges,
    As I thrust with all my “might”.

    Get on top, and take me for a ride;
    Work your body back-and-forth, then go side-to-side.
    Yeah baby, release the intensity inside your soul;
    Feel the warm lava, as my hips continue to roll.
    Collapse on top of me, and I will hold you right there;
    Kiss me on my neck, while I play with your hair.
     
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    Oh so sensual with a dash of sweet. Alluring scribe poet.
     
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    man i wish i can let you come inside
    as i like how this scribe

    is giving me a mental
    lets skip this sentimental

    ish and tell you this
    i like how your tongue does this sensual flick

    in between my legs
    legs shaking as they beg

    for you to go deep
    my sensual brotha can you put me to sleep

    let my hands touch your bald head
    let not this fire we create go dead

    your thrust
    i bust
    my mouth makes a fuss

    because its feel good how you laying me down
    as i keep making this moaning sounds

    please daddy give me more
    and in a little while you best to believe i'll even the score

    as i like the way you

    Lay me down.......:luv:
     
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    Red hot splash when ya lay her down
     
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    To Nevar

    Picking up where you left off...

    When I lay you down
    I'll use my hands
    To slowly arouse the nerve endings
    Of your internal glands.

    I'll work my way from the bottom to the top
    Anticipating the moment you speak these words,
    "Oohh baby please don't stop".

    I'll look down upon your pretty face
    As I stroke you gently and soft;
    Your heart will began to race
    And you will become lost

    My full lips will caress the warmth
    Of your beautiful Nubian flesh
    Starting with the global mounds
    Upon your heaving chest

    As my tongue swipes across your nips
    You will moan my name
    And then the rest of your body
    I will firmly claim

    Come on Nevar,
    Tell me how it feels
    You want my tongue don't you,
    Tell me it's for real

    As I make my move
    To slide between your creamy thighs
    I see the look of welcome anticipation
    In your dark brown bedroom eyes

    Ooh you feel so good
    Your legs wrapped around me tight
    As I thrust deep inside you
    With all my might.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    1SensualBrotha

    Tight scribe, Bruh.

    :toast:
     
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    daddy thrust deep
    put this kitty to sleep

    take me to a place i never had been before
    as my mouth is screaming more and more

    feeling your strong hips move hard
    feeling my heart

    beat upon your tip
    as i let your head get a sip

    of this peach
    teach

    me 69 ways to come down
    ummmm daddy can you hear the sounds

    thats me on top of you
    and to let you know i like the freaky things you do

    slide deep into my walls
    make me crawl

    to where you want me to be
    i see

    you have the right tools to drive me wild
    smoke me brotha as if i was a black and mild

    easy on the brain
    your brain

    is something i will never forget
    as your tongue is keeping me wet

    and hot
    touch and find my g-spot

    look deep into my eyes
    bury your pen in between my thighs

    as i say

    Daddy keep continuing to

    Lay me down......
     
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    To Nevar

    Yeah ma,
    As I thrust deep inside you,
    I hear your moans and breathless sighs;
    I softly nibble on your neck,
    While working your nubian thighs.

    Your hands caress my strong back,
    As I drive deeper inside;
    My mission is to take you,
    For a long-awaited ride.

    Your muscles clench the thickness of my manhood,
    And this sh** feels so **** good.
    You tell me it's all mine
    Because you know you should.

    I look into your eyes,
    And I see ecstasy written on your face;
    At first we started slow,
    But now it's time to quicken the pace.

    Yeah baby, wrap those legs around me tight
    Let me hit it just right
    I like it when it feels this tight
    Close the doors and turn off the lights
    Tonight we do it by candlelight
     
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    making love by candlelight
    while your body is giving me an ultimate delight
    tonight

    we will forget about what is going on in the world
    cause tonight you will show me why im your girl

    ohhhhh yes i can't wait within the next hour
    first by candlelight and then in the shower

    candle set all around
    and then Keith Sweat will be our surround sound

    as he telling us How deep is your love
    So deep that this mental my brotha is coming from above

    take your fingers and trace my form
    your feeling the heat, the warmth

    of me
    your insertion of your fingers is completely

    driving me to the point where i cant get away
    i've waited all day

    for you to come inside
    ride

    me gentle, ride me hard
    well driven into my heat
    as you make me bend over and touch my feet

    [email protected] baby take me Nevar to exstacy
    this fantasy

    is enough to have a heartache
    you rubbing your fingers upon my arch back

    looking at the fatness from the back
    smacking on my but because you know i like it like that

    and then i feel you go down
    and once again here comes that moaning sounds

    as i feel your go in nice and slo
    and i see i got buddy at attention as the blood flo

    baby please dont do me this way
    for you will have me sprung to the point i can't make it through the day

    for i will be mesmerized off the way you

    Lay me down.........

    Sensual Brotha this has truly been one sexy experience for me. but you don't have to continue if you don't want too. just these responses to me is good enough! i enjoyed you very much my love!
     
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    I'll put on a some Maxwell,
    And we can do a lil Sumthin Sumthin
    The next selection will be R. Kelly
    Just right for our grindin' and bumpin'
    And when Keith Sweat asks,
    How deep is your love
    I'll make my way from the bottom to the top
    Giving you my intense, passionate love
    Once Floetry demands,
    All you gotta do is Say Yes
    I'll take my time in showing you
    Why 1Sensual is the best
    Lover you have ever had
    Yeah baby, I can be good or bad
    No matter which one,
    You'll enjoy the ride
    I'll open you up slowly
    And smoothly come inside
    I will whisper erotically in your ear
    While thrusting deep inside your walls
    When KEM starts to sing,
    You'll know that my Love Calls
    As we move to our favorite position
    From the back to be exact,
    You'll get a feel of all this
    Yeah nice and thick and fat
    Eight-and-a-half inches long
    Gentle and tender
    Yet firm and strong
    I stroke you with fervent thrusts
    While holding your curvaceous hips
    I hear the ecstasy in your voice
    As it escapes your juicy lips.
    Ahhh..yeah baby,
    I'll Nevar let this go,
    I want you to fill my warm lava flow
    Deep inside your burning inferno
    shooting fire all over the place
    The tension is evident
    From the expressions on your face.

    Nevar, I, too, have enjoyed this experience. I don't mind doing what we're doing...you have inspired me in a very beautiful way. Thank you. Peace
     
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