Black Poetry : When you hold me!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When you hold me.
    And your arms enfold me.
    I feel so safe and complete.
    Arms that engulf me, a fragrance that intoxicates me.
    When you hold me.
    The strength of your arms surround my heart and my body.
    When you hold me.
    For that moment there is no one but you and me.
    Time is suspended like lunch and laughs with a friend.
    We start to release but just start over again.
    When you hold me.
    Just a hug we both say...It's how we start and finish our
    day. The giving and receiving of the same.
    When you hold me.


    When you hold me.
    And your embrace consoles me.
    I feel secure when I stand in your space.
    Heart to heart and face to face.
    I cherish your warm embrace.
    Arms that engulf me, a fragrance that intoxicates me.
    When you hold me.
    The strength of your touch mystify's me.
    When you hold me.
    I levitate mentally to a place for me, where I feel free.
    When you hold me.
    I know that this is the beginning of something real.
    Something I can feel!

    When you hold me.
    Like I told you.
    It's like heaven right here on earth.
    Loving arms , warm heart, and a sensation that spreads
    to my soul.
    Just a hug, like hot chocolate in your favorite mug.
    When you hold me!
    I feel transcedental and sentimental.
    This is nothing short of ethereal.
    Like the moment in time you replay in your mind.
    As the world around you starts to evaporate
    When you hold me...
    BJS(C)2003 ;)
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was great...
    all the way down the page...
    had me blushin for you...cool:angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lovin dis sistah u on a roll
    flow on ................
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    msluciousb im feeling this scribe, hold me!!!!!!!!!! lol
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i think tonight i'll be down from flyte to ya room
    for all da cuddling hold me !!!!!!!.............lol
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for reading scribes!

    BlackAngel, thanks for always reading and supporting me.

    CarmelPython, you make me smile and sometimes blush!

    Rich, you know my heart better than most people here, so come here my dear
    and "Hold me" and I will "hold you back"!
    Thanks for all your support and kind words...

    Blessings On Your House!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    on my way ......
    most welcome dear Queen
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow
    very nice
    that sure is a nice
    can of feeling
    liking your scribe
    Peace
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    An embrace from that special one can warm the soul, what a lucky soul to have this...Very nice.
     
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