Black Poetry : When you have a good man

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  1. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The rent is four months behind
    You're up to your neck in bills and fines
    Your car is about to be repo'ed so you left it over your mother's house so that would be the last thing they find
    Your grades steady fallin behind
    Holding a mop bucket and a scrub brush in the other hand
    Wondering in your head, "Where do I draw the line?"
    This cold world can be so unkind

    Cuz sometimes you feel so tired that you can't wake up the next morning
    From all the studyin
    cleanin
    and screamin
    Screamin at the next door neighbor and her loud @ss children
    Running up and down the steps playin
    Can't study cuz there is water drippin from yo ceiling
    Called the land lord and it only ended in arguing
    No one understands life can be so disappointing
    So sour that it's seems as if it's wasting

    But when you have a good man
    None of that matters and
    Just his touch takes away the pain
    A soulmate, a GOOD soulmate, will take all your troubles in HIS hand
    And make your concerns his main
    Help you study when he can
    And run up and down steps all day after those bad @ss children
    There is nothing a good man won't do for his woman
    To make her feel serene
    When you have a good man
     
  2. ILL

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    Not to many of them around, we just have to thank God for the ones we do have.
     
  3. spicybrown

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    I heard that Sister Krazelyricks;) You can be as poor as a churchmouse, but when you have that one good man by your side, you feel like you done hit the jackpot:spinstar:

    A fitting tribute during a drought :hearts4:
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up sis , so few yet unfound .
    scribe on gurl !!
     
  5. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gurl when you find that kind of man send his brother to me. i felt every word that was written in this piece do flo on sis.:welldone:
     
  6. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I likes that!!!!!
    WOW!!!!
    That's a good man!!!
     
  7. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DIS WAZ SO TRUE MY SISTA
    NICE DROP
    SO FLO ON WIT MO TRUTHZ BOUT OUR BRATHAZ

    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
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    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know what you mean, a good man makes all the bad in life seem worthwhile once you find HIM.
     
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    i hope i can be this for a girl who wants me one day :horse: :welldone: