Black Poetry : WHEN YOU ! / FOR U I WILL !

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    When u feel lost in the night
    when u feel ya world ain't right
    call on my love from flyte

    when time seen so tough
    and the love u pose get rough
    your all not enough
    u can call on me

    I'll be yo buck of love high
    the protector of ya night
    to see you be felt alright
    just call on me and i will

    i'll be yo star dat u see
    caress you when ya sleep
    wipe tears from yo cheeks
    tell how sweet & unique u be

    I will cross the ocean for you
    go bring you the moon and be
    your hero, the strength u need
    i'll be your sun in the sky
    be the lover that's fly
    light the way of all times
    for u i will

    I will be the cover to your heart
    and the shelter to ya love
    together i'll see you through
    be the comfort, don't have to worry
    in these arms i will

    if there's a stain of pain
    and hardship to da brain
    call on me , i'll be there in a hurry
    i'll lay my life on the line
    i'll always be there for all time
    for u lady i will

    if there's a mountain in time
    that sheer ya heart from mines
    for you my love i'll move
    so don't u worry i'll be on a dime
    to bring you love's sunshine

    when u taste lonelyness
    and the pour of sourness
    count on me for joyful happiness
    and a soul that confess
    cause for you i will

    i will swim da sea to bring u chillz
    and mesmerize ya body in thrillz
    sweep u in rapture to feel
    to know my love is real , for u i will
    I
    *W
    ***I
    ****L
    *****L
    promise u more the diamonds
    promise u more then gold
    promise u more then words

    i give u honesty and respect
    listen intently never break a sweat
    i'll give u laughter & joy
    forever be the lover down to a core
    i'll give u trust and worthyness
    never afraid to open and confess
    for u i will
    give my heart and mood
    my love in a spool of warmness
    to see u have all da happiness
    promise u baby i will
    I
    Will
    I
    will
    alwayz love u when u need me !
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  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I don't know what to say....somethings you pose takes me and a masterpiece to be admired and not added too this is one of them scribes you just sit back and take in.... :ilu:

    Peace
    Angel
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    aweeeeeeeee! Angel thank u so much from da heart
    and for u i will ...........happy u enjoyed this feeling i felt
    peace unto u Angel cakes
     
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    re:I Will

    Rich, this is a beautiful poem. :bellydance:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank u so much Poetrymama .....i'm so humbled
    and for u i will again and again ( Da remix coming soon)
    when u feel i will 2
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You know, when I read this I just had to sit back and sigh. A man who will do all that..geez, this was a gem. Okay on to part 2....
     
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    big thankz Watz a man that will and real is a gem a King
    to his Queen , heart and lover ......peace be still.............
     
  8. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dang you see I got caught up again reading
    became feeling became being and now I'm all cught up again

    This is becoming a habit that is slowly growing addictive
     
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    thank u soulful2006 it's ok get addictive get lost in it
    as i instill da beauty .........
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now that I Have your blessing I do Believe I can allow myself to fall head over hills for your poetry

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