Black Poetry : when you come to cali

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Oct 22, 2001.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i wanna spend some time
    just kickin it
    nothin fancy...
    cuz everything we do
    be special

    r u down
    for grabbin a
    bucket of KFC,
    some hot sauce
    & ridin
    in my hoopti
    down
    Imperial Hwy
    toward the beach?

    right by the airport...

    yeeeeeeaah!

    we could park
    on a deserted
    cul de sac
    on Pershing Way
    round sunset
    and
    watch the planes
    take off

    be like we at the
    very end of the
    runway, right
    where the big shiny
    birds take off
    high ova our
    heads
    and make
    that
    spectacular
    turn in the sky
    ova the
    water

    headin somewhere
    back east...

    somethin bout them
    birds glidin, perfect
    symmetry between
    ocean & heaven!!!!

    be so awesome
    at sunset!!!

    i wanna spend some time
    just kickin it
    laughin and actin crazy
    people-watchin...
    croonin to the oldies
    blastin on the radio
    rollin up the way
    toward the Marina
    wind blowin in our
    hair...
    sippin on somethin
    Mellow & GOTdang,
    Delicious from straws
    in our "open containers" :D

    nothin fancy...

    cuz every moment we share
    be special


    Alyce, (c) 2001
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    see that what i'm talking bout

    nothing fancy just the two sharing moments
    gurl ya talking some good ole vibe here....sho nuff !;)

    mo/luv sista Queen A...
     
  3. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well to me

    this day out sounds just about perfect....

    sippin away, munchin on kfc, cruisin by the sea, radio blastin, at sunset.....

    simple things, simple pleasures..you planned the day well Miss A..

    K
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    das liming mon!

    Said da Island girl to da city girl.
    Come n lime with me.......
    said da city girl to da island girl
    what da hell does that mean.
    It's like you say in the words on this page.
    Its kickin it with simple pleasures.
    Lets lime sometime......even if only in mind!
     
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    Alyce......

    nothing better, then just kickin it.....

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alyce

    this is so rich! You paint word images well here, and give a sense of actually writing this in the moment.. makes me wanna come that way, just to share this moment too. Loved it.
     
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    Sweet A, I'm on my way......
     
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    i'm there...

    pick me up at LAX
    and make reservations for
    ROSCO's
    chicken and waffles
    afterwards
    we can take a ride down
    the PCH--Pacific Coast Highway
    maybe stop and play
    along the coastline
    of nature's way
    well, anyway
    we may even go into my hood
    you know
    inglewood's
    always up to no good
    but it's understood
    that when the sun goes down
    the freaks come out
    and the real dawgs
    howl.

    YOU KNOW.:)
     
  9. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    grinning.....

    thank you Poets...for feelin my vybe & cruisin wit me.....and baller....inglewatts is right up my alley, my brutha! :)

    a
     
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    you know you took us there!

    I can hear the planes above us.
    The Cali winds do love us.
    Hair flyin in the wind
    Diggin the atmosphere we in.
    When you talk about Cali
    It's up all the alley
    It be da bombastic,fantastic
    and we want to be where you are.
    Girllllllllllllllllll!!:heart: and SOUL!
     
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