Black Poetry : When You Call

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's the thoughtfulness
    that you exude
    when in the recesses of
    your mind
    my name moves into
    a circumference
    and an angel echoes
    digits that speed dials
    one number -- frequently...

    Telephone frequency
    divulges privacy
    conversations whether
    short or long
    hold me captive to
    your life's anthology
    and I'm feeling
    you -- feeling me

    When you call
    I'm 'open' to drink
    a tall glass of dizzy
    keeps me smiling
    wide with a hint
    of ginger

    When you call
    My eyes light up
    an entire room
    then perspiration
    forms around my
    soul as condensed
    liquid-- purifying
    my veins...my mind's
    acceptance
    ...speeches...about
    the days goings-on

    ...and
    When you call
    I see the sands
    of the sea running
    red making love puddles
    on the beach where the
    sunset reaches
    lofty memories of
    our yesterdays and
    tomorrows

    When you call
    your voice smoothes
    out the ridges of coral
    that spread silence
    in the soak of my ocean
    floor

    When you call
    a piano played for
    me... a lover's solo
    in mahogany...keys
    that unlocked
    the hidden treasures
    for you to see
    how happiness
    lives beneath
    trapped doors
    holding
    satisfaction hostage
    to desires

    And... when YOU call
    me (S.B.), love no
    longer runs for cover
    underneath my
    winter's coat
    raglan
    sleeve ~~


    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the flo of this piece is so soothing, if i don't say so myself, dear poetess. i'm lovin' it!

    ~~~letlovepoetryflo~~~
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sista List~

    The ~lovepoetryisflo-ing~ and it just feelz right!

    Thank you girl I'm glad that you liked the read!


    One. :wink:
     
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    there is nothing like it

    is there, my sista? This is so soulful and sweet! I like that "tall glass of dizzy"....now I know what I've been drinking...when she calls! VERY nice!

    ciao
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bassaman~

    You are quite right, there is 'nothin' quite like it brotha!

    Glad you dig the "tall glass of dizzy" ... I see we both consume the same type of beverage! :lol:


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  6. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dayuuum - now just what in the hell did I do with N2's digits??!!??

    I gotz ta call her up!!! I've been drinking dizzy all evening and now it be time ta get balanced with the smooth taste of N2 juice!!!! :lol: :wink:

    Lovin' ya flow N2 my sistah!!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ

    You know it's 'all for you' sweet darlin'! :wink:

    Thanks for reading me my Honey-Bee (can you come give me a GQ 'sting') :lol:


    :heart: ya'.
     
  8. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Buzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!! :lol:

    Ya just been stung!!!!!!!!!


    :heart:
    GQ
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ~

    :eeek: Oooooh, it hurtz sooooo good! Mmmmm!

    I don't think I'll ever want you to take the stinger out!! :lol:


    :kiss:

    Thanx Boo!
     
  10. Amun-Ra

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    I'm smiling!

    I think I had a "tall glass of dizzy" and it made me smile as much as this piece--it's nice to have a smile put on your face--thanx--Amun-Ra
     
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