Black Poetry : When Will I Call? - In Response to GA Sunshyne's When Will You Call?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bishop, Feb 19, 2002.

  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Been trying for a while
    To dial
    The correct digits
    Man…why didn’t I give her my number?
    Mmmm when I think of her smooth skin
    And caramel complexion
    Now I know I have to figure this out
    I wish I knew what these last 2 digits were
    Directory assistance was no good..
    Her number isn’t listed
    Went back to the place where I saw her last
    Hoping she would be there
    But no luck…
    Meanwhile this constant voice in my head
    Is telling me to forget about it
    She probably gave me the wrong number anyway…
    But I got to know
    Trying random
    Combinations
    I’ll stay up all night if I have to…..
    Oh oh it’s ringing…
    Hello?
    Man wrong number again….
    Well if at first you don’t succeed
    Try, try again
    For the 62nd time in an hour
    But I’m going to find her……..
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bish, Bish, Bish!!!

    Always carry a pen dawg!!!!! :laugh:

    Good follow-up piece bro!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    the last part made me laugh
    man keep trying
    if first you don't succeed
    but at least you've answered her question

    dssNY

    overanalyzing
     
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    Bishop.


    hahaha... this heah... is priceless-ly cute!! :D

    (sorta reminds me of you!)

    i love the follow-up... let me know if you eva
    figure out her number... betta yet! you might
    just wanna call Me instead!! :D

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bishop,

    This is romantically tyte. Scribe On Poet!


    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  6. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ
    I did man, but I think I must have left the number in my pants when I washed them.......can't make out those last 2 digits.....
    Soja
    man you know it be like that sometime

    Sunshyne
    hope you don't mind me taking a piggyback ride on your flow.

    coco
    You know I got to bring that romantic egde someway or another.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Bishop man u on da phone check list
    coz u making to ring off da hook ! TYGHT
     
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    feelin this one. nice reply to the GA Sunshynes poem
     
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    Bishop

    I think GA's line was just busy cause she be a certified Destee Pimptress...lol

    I'm just kiddin! hey does anyone else like pick on her besides me?!? lol

    Bishop this was tight dog!!! but you will lose some of the best if you dont work on that memory...lol

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    It's not the memory doc.....I just should have taken the number out of my pocket before I washed the pants......
     
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