Black Poetry : When were like this.. it feels so good

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Aug 24, 2004.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let me hold you in my arms. :love:
    Feels good.

    Natural.

    All so new.
    This is a moment for me and you.
    Let’s connect.
    Words unspoken.
    Whisper in my ear.

    I want to understand.
    Why the tears?
    I will always wonder.
    Are they sad, or happy thoughts.
    Holding you close like this feels so good.

    I’m totally into you. :spin:

    I’m looking around, but focused on what you do.
    Someone’s watching taking notes.
    I know he wants to say.
    Look at her in his arms.
    I wish it was that way.
    In my life, in my world.
    I would love to have that girl.

    Nothing seems out of place.
    My right hand is just below your waist,
    touching you in that place.
    Words are spoken.
    Nothing special.
    Silent Moments taken.
    Holding you in my arms.

    I do understand.

    It feels like the first time.
    Yet we have been together like this before.
    For so long.
    I know your suppose to be with me.
    It is written in the touch,
    and the smiles I have on my face.
    In my heart.
    When were like this.
     
  2. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Hodeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

    Aiight, bruh...nice...very nice. Dapz.

    :thanks: for a very good description of how it is to be with that special woman.

    :toast:
     
  3. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    yo...lovely sentiments from a heart thas tru
    this is a good poem hodee...keep dropin dem...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very smoove piece, definit, feeling this
     
  5. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hodee the hopeless romantic...:love: very sweet my brotha :)
    Like a melody of the smoothest love ballad :)
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awe now this was so smooth....had me reflecting
    nice scribe..diggin it fo sho!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome flowing brutha HODEE man u let it all dip to canvas here
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like when you're with that special one, the sun rises, and the moon sets. Very romantic piece.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When we're like this :love: two pea's in a pot...a hot pot. Yall got it going on, and I like that...I ain't mad at ya, just happy that you're happy :wink:
    I liked and enjoyed this piece a lot, and I'm sure she loved it as well...
     
  10. Prizefighter16

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    heres' another one
    powerful piece, filled with emotion
    loved it, keep the flow goin
     
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