Black Poetry : When We Valentine

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Feb 12, 2002.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *dedicated to 24/7/365 lovin*


    When we valentine


    nothing does me
    like the brush of
    his warm
    back against
    the damp, flushed
    fullness of
    my breasts
    as we scoot & slide
    into our spoon
    facing the open
    east window at twilight...

    my left arm
    cradles his
    head, my lips
    lightly kiss his
    salt and pepper
    crown, balding
    and still, so beautiful

    my fingers
    move in a playful
    tickling,
    sneak attack from
    the right in the
    sparse patch
    of hair
    on his chest


    When we valentine

    nothing works me
    like the feel of
    his left hand
    extended & bending,
    searching
    for mine
    & our fingers
    clasp in the grip
    of love,

    and from that place
    where I live
    in him
    I feel the vibrations
    swelling and hear
    the sounds of deep
    throaty sighs
    emanating from
    his back
    firmly pressing
    affecting...
    erecting
    my nipples

    When we valentine

    nothing takes me there
    like his smooth buttocks
    & hips
    teasing/flexing
    ...undulating
    so snuggly up and hot
    against my
    love~thatch
    & rubbing down against
    my thighs…

    When we valentine

    nothing satisfies
    like the rhythms
    of
    our breathing
    as our hearts
    endure
    aftershock
    after/shocks
    that slowly
    mellow
    in this
    mocha/cocoa
    cocoon

    we melt,
    slipping
    into slumber
    inside the US-
    shaped
    valentine
    of
    our spoon


    alyce (c) 2002
     
  2. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmmmmm......now Sweet A. I'm trying to behave myself, but you make it hard..............uhmmm...mmmmm...anyway i have to go take a walk outside in the cold air.
     
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    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now this is hot!!!
    Thanks for sharing!
     
  4. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The internal "Cold Shower" has run out of water. WOW!

    24/7/365 for sure.

    BE
     
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    this is so lovely
    and very well put...
    i love it.
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    Sista Sista

    Keep lovin that man like you do ma!!! Beautiful flow dear!

    Madd Love
    Reas
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce.


    ...you betta hush!! :D

    on 2nd thought... g'on & talk about it sis!

    this was felt... felt & then felt some 'mo!

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
  8. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that's what i'm talkin about!

    Go on girl wit cho bad self! When we valentine, huh?
    Whew, just thinkin about it causes lil beads of sweat to
    form on my brow! Very nice my sista!:toast:
     
  9. Bert

    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mo power to you and yours, sis. This is incredible! Whewwwweeeeee!!!!! Can't touch it!

    BRB
     
  10. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alrighty then Alyce...

    Queen, ya laid it down here. Brotha should be proud to "Valentine" with ya all the time!!!

    Dug this straight like that!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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