Black Poetry : When we must say goodbye...

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  1. MzMelanie2u2

    MzMelanie2u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When we must say Good Bye…

    Years and years all full of tears, from the emotional damage that has taken place
    Not a soul to blame for such distinguished pain, But yet we both declare that…
    “its not my fault”…!
    What is this game we play from day to day that leaves us longing for a different love?
    Maybe its that we were only meant to be for a season and now for that reason,
    the leaves are all falling from the trees that used to blossom our supposedly undying love.
    So I’m here on bended knees, praying to God for this whole fiasco to please,
    Stop!
    So with a stony heart and blood shot eyes, I leave through this door, and will try not to cry, for I just want to forget it all.
    And this is when we must say goodbye.
    Halfhearted I close the door behind me and I head in the direction in which I feel the world will embrace me with comfort. Cuz now my heart is in need of mending and all of it is pending upon me.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime goodbye's be sweet hello's and mend from the grace
    of release.......tyte drop
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gee I've been here before, but in time, situations do change for the better. Flow on sista.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very heartfelt but as Rich say
    that goodbye leads to sweet hellos...
    very nicely posed enjoyed this here
    Peace
    Angel
     
  5. hisili

    hisili Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    im still tryna figure out how to say goodbye to someone, neva turns out well off 4 me but u broke it down and az alwayz im feelin yo poetry.
     
  6. MzMelanie2u2

    MzMelanie2u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey, $$Rich$$...Watz...Angel...and Hisili !
    Thank you so much for your love, it truley means alot.
    And ya know, Rich and Angel, Ive learned that that saying is very true,
    cuz I recieved a very sweet hello not too long ago..lol..
    And C (hisili), dont worry sweety its all gunna work out for you,
    i suggest you take Rich's and Angel's saying into consideration.
    Well, much love to yall..."KEEP EM COMIN FAM"...1
     
  7. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice flow...for you surely know when it's time to go. We grow with time and relationships. Much luck to ya
     
  8. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Home is where the heart is, but my heart isn't her
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    nice...

    Sad poem, but I like how it flowed. I hope everything works its way out.
     
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